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NaNoWriMo? Deborah fall down, go boom.

The numbers aren’t looking good. Having only produced 6,489 words so far, I’ll never get to 50,000 by midnight tomorrow. Nevertheless …

I did get another 6,489 words closer to a working first draft.

Plus, I spent time revisiting the earlier work, seeing with fresh eyes what did and didn’t work, and got the creative juices flowing again on that particular story. I certainly do not regret, not for one minute, participating in NaNo this year even if I fell far short of “winning.”

My game plan is to complete the first draft for this particular novel before November 2013 — and use next year’s event to jump-start a new book.

For me, at least, NaNo isn’t the best approach to a project that’s well underway. I simply found myself too tangled up in needing to do serious research and rewriting of last year’s work, needing to get things in order before I could add more to mix. There were just too many loose threads, scattered scenes, jumbled characterizations, shifting settings … The energy generated by this great November event might best be used on a new project each year.

Huge cheers to the many writers who made their 50K this year, and a toast to all of participants. See you all next year!

National Novel Writing Month: Ready, Set, Go!

Participant badge for 2012 NaNoWriMoHappy November 1! Greetings from the land of NaNoWriMo, where 300,000 or so novelists and would-be-novels are scrambling to produce 50,000 words in a measly 30 days.

Just exactly how do they — we — intend to do that?

One word at a time.

Or 1,667 words a day.

Or whatever other (new, old, imaginary…) math works out to 50K words by midnight November 30. Oh, yeah, baby. That’s doable. That’s reachable. That’s … Well, that’s just plumb crazy. But it’s still possible. I know, because 36,843 writers did it last year. I was one of them. And I’m going to do it again.

Write on, my fellow Wrimos. Write like the wind!

Happy NaNo Prep Day, everyone!

I hope you’re make strides in preparing for National Novel Writing Month — whether that means learning the awesome new software Aeon Timeline (which syncs with Scrivener!), or hitting the grocery store for coffee, chocolate and fixin’s for quick and easy meals, or scribbling frantically in your novel-planning notebook.

Having been a bit mired in a client job — no complaints ’cause getting paid to write is always awesome — I hope to catch up on all of that and more in the next two weeks as we run headlong, ready or not, into November 1!

Shout out to young female writers: Fiction Award!

photo by Double–M

If you’re female, under 32 and a would-be novelist … and most especially if you’ve been working some crazy jobs to make ends meet:

Check out McSweeney’s Amanda Davis Highwire Fiction Award!

They’ll be bestowing a no-strings-attached $2,500 award to a struggling word-gal. So you can keep doing that highwire thing you do.

NaNoWriMo Lesson #2: Pantsing It (Part One)

NaNoLand* is replete with terminology that’s collected over the years.

Things like: “plot bunnies,” which are quickly breeding ideas that would be great for some other story, just not the one you’re working on; “Mr. Ian Woon,” an anagram of NaNoWriMo and homage character appearing in countless nano novels; and the “Traveling Shovel of Death,” a convenient method of dispatch that has cropped up in many a nano effort.

My favorite nano term is “pantsing it,” which refers — as you have no doubt already surmised because you are smart and sexy and read really fast — to starting the month with nothing more than a vague idea for a book. No notes, character sketches, research, or outline. Just the idea.

And then flying by the seat of your pants through 50,000 words.

Why not plan in advance?

I usually do. In fact, I’ve relentlessly pre-planned every failed novel lying comatose in my computer.

(Yes, there are many. And, no, it’s not easy to admit that. For more about my novel-writing angst, please refer to the opening OW post. Moving on now.)

Over the years, I’ve fashioned many a story outline. Not to mention plot map, script treatment, character bio, location description, etc. I’ve used up entire legal pads and packs of index cards. Struggled with Word’s outlining function. And been seduced (with no happy ending) by more than one application whispering sweet nothings about plot points, color coding and easy story development into my eager ears.

All this hurly-burly has generally caused one of two — or both of two — things to happen:

  • All the creative juice gets squeezed right out of a project. It seems that the more energy I put into writing about a story, the less interest I have in actually writing the story itself.
  • I get this weird, creepy feeling there’s a tall stack of very dense and heavy must-dos building up behind me, and sooner or later that stack is going to fall over and crush me. “Too much! Too much!” my feeble brain shrieks.

Where do pressure, boredom, stress and unreasoning panic lead? Project burnout. Writer’s block. Comatose novels.

Why I went pantless — er, pantsed it — for NaNo.

My primary goal was to get out of my comfort zone. Way, way out, if possible. If it that meant racing as far as I could out the tiniest, narrowest spit of land spinning as far as out into that sea of fiction as anyone has ever gone, well, damnit, that was my destination.

It was also a pragmatic choice. I was jumping into NaNoWriMo at the last minute and had exactly one novel idea that I hadn’t already beaten senseless with the Traveling Story-Planner of Death. So that’s the one I decided to write.

And how did it all work out, this flying by the seat of my pants?

Tell you later.

This post is already too long. (Probably comes of not planning in advance.)

Are you into planning or pantsing it — or a balanced mix of the two? I’d love to hear how you approach a project in its early stages.

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dh

* NaNoLand is the virtual wonderland inhabited by the hundreds of thousands of people worldwide who participate in National Novel Writing Month during November. This event has writers vowing to draft 50,000 words of a novel in just 30 days. Most who sign up never get started. Many who do start fall short of their goal (but are still awesome and certain to reach it next year). Those who make our 50K in time are called Winners. What do we win? Glory, reknown and bragging rights. At least until next November.

Deborah versus NaNoWriMo: 50,702 words in 29 days!

I hit 50,702 words on November 29 which makes me a first time, first win Nanoist.

That’s no small potatoes. Or pancakes for that matter. Or any other small starchy food, dammit.

That’s a dry-aged, bone-in sirloin strip steak, is what that is. With a big bold Cabernet, thank you. Hell, throw in some small starchy side dishes and a big salad while you’re at it.

A round for the house, on me!

There are lessons to learn from this.

And I promise to write about them. As soon as I can remember what they are. Right now, the only thing I can think to say is, “I win! I win! I win!”

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dh

P.S. Nano Win = Web badges (see above), a printable certificate (very like the badges but I can add my name) and, most importantly, bragging rights. Money, you ask? Pffft! Don’t be daft. Writers aren’t in it for the money.

UPDATED 11/30 – It seems that I was a little loopy when I posted this. My winning word count was actually 50,706 in 30 days. Sleep deprivation is fun, no? Um, no.

 

NaNoWriMo Lesson #1: Zero Drafting

Okay, time for a short series of posts about what I’m getting out of National Novel Writing Month. (For those of you growing allergic to all the wrimo stuff, I promise to intersperse these with other, non-nano writing topics. Cross my heart.)

Before I signed up for NaNoWriMo, I checked out the forums a bit and came across a comment from someone referring to his/her nano novel work as a “zero draft.”

I loved that phrase! It made perfect, immediate sense. A zero draft could count — but it didn’t have to be accounted for. It could be the work I did before the work I do. The notes I made about the notes I would need to make if I were to really write something later. No pressure, no panic, no block. If I wanted, I could even toss the thing out later, and there would be no aftermath, like there is when Draft 1 never leads to Draft 2.

A zero draft is a 100% guilt-free, no-editing-needed wordy playground.

Before I committed to NaNo, I did a little experiment. I needed to see if this whole crazy idea of writing without editing could possibly work for me — a woman who fervently believes that the true art of writing lies in re-writing. My plan was to start writing and keep going. No editing, no fixing, no deleting. I had no time limit and no particular word count in mind — although I was curious if I could get anywhere near the nano daily target of 1,667 words.

On Nov. 1, I started writing about 10 pm. Two hours later, I had 1,300 of the most tangled, nonsensical, confused and typo-ridden words I’ve ever written.

But, wait. Not every word was awful.

In fact, the last few hundred words had really turned into something.

One minute, my female lead is riding a train just sort of people-watching as a young woman tries to catch a young man’s eye … and the next moment she’s realizing that she’d been watching a ghost. The girl on the train was dead, murdered and haunting the Chicago Brown Line train. Wait … what?!

Now that, ladies and gentlemen, is what I call a story starter.

Two hours, 1,300 words, one enticing scene.

I signed up for NaNo the next day. My screen name in the forums is ZeroDraftingGenius, lol.

Do you zero draft? Or is there some other method/mind trick that you use to get the work started and/or keep it going?

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dh

words worth repeating
If it sounds like writing, I re-write it.
~ Elmore Leonard

 
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